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My Heart Please by Hokage3 My Heart Please by Hokage3
My Heart Please

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His Heart
It was a clear sunny day, so I decided to take a walk, leaving behind the assignments I have to finish before tomorrow. The day was so nice; I canít remember the last time it rained. But thereís one memorable thing that I recollect, when I look at the skies, that rainy day when I met a girl, whom I canít forget.

I walked and walked, without the care of where I am to go. But my feet brought me to a familiar place, the park, where I usually spend my free time. There, I saw a beautiful face, of a girl who once made my heart beat in a strange manner. I wonder, is destiny playing tricks on me? She was standing there, on the tree near the short steps. She was whispering words with tender. I was hesitant to approach her, for I have nothing to tell her, but my feelings for her. On that moment, she turned her head to my direction. Our eyes met, with surprise. And then she slowly walked towards me, and she said ďHelloĒ. My Heart Please, donít beat so fast, for she may notice, how nervous I am to be in front of her

She thanked me for the last time, when I walked her home on that rainy day. She smiled. Like an angel, she touched my heart again. She hugged my left arm, and started to bring me to a place, Should I go or Should I not?

Her Heart
It was a clear sunny day; it was warm, that it reminded me of how cold it was back then, that rainy afternoon, when my heart was broken. It was shivery cold, both to my body and heart, after my beloved said that he loves somebody else. With my red umbrella, I fought the breeze, and the sadness.

I walked and walked, excited to go to the park, to see that special place. To that same tree, where I once fell in love, I stood. I whispered to the tree, that I am ready to move on, and will see him as a friend and not as a lover. And then I turned my head facing the stairs. To my surprise, my eyes met his. That guy, who shared his uniform and his kindness to warm me a little. I will not forget that day. I know that I havenít really thanked him enough for his help.

I approached him, as he stood there with a nervous look. I said ďhelloĒ and thanked him again; I hope he can still remember. When I smiled, I heard his heart beating. My Heart Please, give me courage to tell this guy, how thankful I am that he walked me home under that cold rain. I hugged his left arm, and I started to walk, bringing him to that special place. Will he go, or will he not?

Their Hearts
We walked towards the Parkís central fountain, a special place known to grant wishes of hopeful dreamers. The only thing thatís running into my mind right now is for this moment to last a little longer.
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Love06021999 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
so cute!!!!!!!!!!
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(^_^) cute stories can be as simple as that....
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Love06021999 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
you're right xD
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xxheartlessbitchxx Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2011
WOW Sir Mark! Everything here fits nicely! Ang ganda po ng bakground, and the lighting and coloring
's so damn perfect and calming! Ganda po!~
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pasensya sa late reply....heh, not really perfect, thanks sa comment....been trying to incorporate decent background on my works, automatic dapat aralin lighting, so I'm doing my best to improve on this aspect...
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mysticswordsman21 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so beautiful *u*
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thankies...sorry for the late reply...haven't been reading the messages recently, but now, I'm always present..
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MusicMew Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow -- great work. It continues to improve! I love your effect of filtering the light through the trees. It gives it a dreamy quality. And the story is great as well!
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the nice comment...and yep, I gave extra effort on the story, it has to be well executed for the continuation of their story...and improving..glad you think I do...(^_^)
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nekoneko1996 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Student General Artist
cute
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, sorry for the late reply...
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nekoneko1996 Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Student General Artist
ur welcome... ^^
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anirhapsodist Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Naunahan ako! Anyways, it's spring so i can still draw... but my tablet pen broke just recently... back to mouse and trad
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh, nakita ko nga yung artwork mo with the same concept...but you manages to make it distinct from my work's angle...and about your tablet, aren't it a little bit small for a working hand? just wondering
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anirhapsodist Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
it is. it really is
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Jesi-Jess Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It was so well done, and I love the story ^^ <3 great job
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks...the story required a percent of my novel type story telling...look forward for the continuation..I'll give it a title.."The Promise in the Fountain of Wishes"....
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Jesi-Jess Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh I can't wait to see!! QUQ I love all the spoilers I get! Just makes me more impaitent for the art work LMAO You think of such awesome titles >w<
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rianbowart Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
so many things to love about this. just......WOW!
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
(^_^)WOW is enough to express your appreciation...thanks very much....
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Apollyon2011 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011
Dude... This is really awesome work! But, I'm assuming you're single, and doesn't drawing this kind of scene depress the fuck out of you? It sure does to me (I'm single too).
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeh, imagine if I was inspired doing this..heh just joking...I'm enjoying and suffering the single Life, but hey, as they say, there's a right time for everything. so is to love...I will definitely bump into a random girl one day, and if my heart tells me that she's the one, then, I will take the next step...(darn it, It's not me to spit Romantic Cool words, I must fill my heart with pain and agony, of hatred and misfortune...gyaaaaaa)I feel for you dude, I mean it....and thanks for the comment..the single guy appreciate it
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Apollyon2011 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011
Yeah, man. Single life definitely has its ups and downs. Without a doubt. But, ya know, after being alone for 24 years (my age), it starts to get to you. You see all your friends in committed relationships, married, or engaged. Something like that. Then you have you, single, and can't figure out what's wrong... But, I do think you're absolutely right about the way in which you, or I, will meet our soul mates. Randomly bumping into or meeting a girl by chance, and we'll immediately feel that connection... I'm really hoping that comes true, for both of us. No problem, bro. Keep in touch. =)
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wel, they say that to get the thing you've never had before, you got to do something you've never done before...maybe you don't court, (like I do) since you are to busy with things...try to introduce yourself to people, one girl might find you attractive Yeah, I'm not the one to talk, all I know is that I have a crush in college that I bump into last month, and it was heaven...
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Apollyon2011 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011
Good point. I'm sorta dating this one chick right now, but she is sending me very hard-mixed signals. I can't decipher her. So, in a way, it's painful dating her... The things I do for human contact...
Aww, you bumped into your crush, huh? What are you going to do to follow-up with that? =)
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HWAAAAA, you're already dating a girl,that's a good news. so d\far, I'm still stuck. heh anyways, girls are hard nuts to crack, but believe me,I think they are fun to be with (in theory anyway).I'm so far away with my crush, and I don't see a future with her by my side. I'm being realistic, for now, I will focus on my career, although I am trying to show interest on this one girl...heh
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Apollyon2011 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
DUDE!!!! Shit has gone down. The girl I WAS dating is completely PSYCHOTIC! She's also an unbelievable bitch, liar, impersonator, and moron. She's just such a horrible person. Be glad you are still single. I'm running back to my single days right now!! I hope your luck is better than mine! XD
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner May 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
been a while man, and to hear this bad news from way back, I feel sorry for you in a way...I can never consider a loveless life lucky, but it is far more better than a hellish relationship...I know you will find her soon, I myself have problems with courting, since I'm a complete shy type...still, keep your hopes up..good luck...they say that your true love is closer than you imagined...
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-This artwork took about 10 and half hours to finish. There are three challenges here, to draw two characters in a single canvas, to create a Background where they can interact, and to execute proper lighting that will effectively blend the two former elements together. I can say that this artwork is a decent attempt, since I failed in almost all the factors that I want to achieve. Anyways, this is my simple treat for what many people consider as the month of hearts. I hope you like it…Next time, it will be “Hokage, Fireflies and Tradition”
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trans4mers Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Student Artist
this is really good
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Hokage3 Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot...and sorry for the late reply..(^_^)
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trans4mers Featured By Owner May 27, 2011  Student Artist
your welcome
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